Corrections/Suggestions

• Mark misspelled words or typos (wrong words)

  • If you feel comfortable, marking any punctuation errors or agreement issues

• Lack of clarity

  • I had to re-read this sentence 3 times to understand it

  • I am not sure what you are trying to say here

  • This example may be a stretch

• Repetition

  • I have seen this word a lot

  • Did you know you used the same word in the same sentence?

  • Three paragraphs in a row begin with the same word.

• Word usage

  • I would like to suggest the use of this word instead

  • This word triggers emotions that are unpleasant

Emotional

• What would you highlight or underline as a keepsake if you were reading this in book form?

• What absolutely has to stay in the book - do not delete!

• This needs to be expanded or illustrated with more depth

• This went on too long - you lost me about here

• This could be confusing to people who do not know…

• This may be insensitive 

Content

• This contradicts something you said earlier 

• This Bible verse may not be used correctly or it needs additional explanation

• Great place to add more research (outside sources)

• This point is strong or this point is weak and why?

• Look at the balance of teaching and connection (emotion)

• Do the action-steps match the teaching? 

• Are the action steps and the teaching relatable to both male/female and young/older?